Updated NetNewsWire Press Release

Thanks for all the feedback on the press release for NetNewsWire. Here’s an updated draft.

Most of the feedback was about two things:

1. It should describe better what NetNewsWire is, what it does, and why that’s cool.

2. It should use active voice more often.

I think both things are better in the current draft. What do you think—is it ready to go?

12 Feb 2003

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