inessential by Brent Simmons

Updated NetNewsWire Press Release

Thanks for all the feedback on the press release for NetNewsWire. Here’s an updated draft.

Most of the feedback was about two things:

1. It should describe better what NetNewsWire is, what it does, and why that’s cool.

2. It should use active voice more often.

I think both things are better in the current draft. What do you think—is it ready to go?